The El Bimbo Variations by Adam David

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(Quiet comm is quiet...at least since my last post. Anyone out there? o_o)

This is rather non-traditional poetry, but I first learned about it in the poetry unit of a literature class, so I have it on good authority that it counts!
The El Bimbo Variations by Adam David is a collection of 99 variations on the theme of the first line of Ang Huling El Bimbo (The Last El Bimbo) by the Eraserheads, an iconic Nineties song about first love and later loss.  (I did the English translations of each variation myself.)

Original Lyrics Kamukha mo si Paraluman nung tayo ay bata pa (You looked like Paraluman when we were young)

Reductive Kamukha mo dati                si Paraluman.	Reductive You used to look like                        Paraluman.
Antonymy Hindi niya kamukha si Paraluman                ngayong sila ay matanda na.	Antonymy She doesn't look like Paraluman                         now that they are old.
Another Point Of View Kamukha ko si Paraluman               nung kabataan namin.	Another Point of View I looked like Paraluman                          in our youth.
Permutation Nung bata pa tayo        si Paraluman ay kamukha mo.	Permutation When we were young      Paraluman looked like you.

Parsed Sentence

Déjà Vu Kamukha mo si Paraluman                nung tayo ay bata pa                     si Paraluman kamukha mo.	Déjà Vu You looked like Paraluman              when we were young                     Paraluman looked like you.
With One Letter Missing Kamukha mo si Paraluman                nung tayo ay bata, a.	With One Letter Missing Y'know, you looked like Paraluman                          when we were young.
With One Word Missing Kamukha mo si Paraluman.             Tayo ay bata pa.	With One Word Missing You look like Paraluman.       We are still young.
Exclamatory Oh my God, dude!!! Kamukha mo noon si Paraluman!!! DaFuuuuuck!!!	Exclamatory Oh my God, dude!!! You used to look like Paraluman!!! DaFuuuuuck!!!
Doubtful Kamukha daw niya dati si Paraluman. Daw.	Doubtful They say she used to look like Paraluman.  Or so they say.
Confessional Alam mo ba, matagal ko nang iniisip na ... dati, nung bata pa tayo ... kahawig mo si ... Paraluman ... crush nga kita nun, e ...	Confessional Did you know, I always thought that ... back then, when we were young ... you looked like ... Paraluman ... actually, I had a crush on you back then ...
Single Contradiction Talaga?	Single Contradiction Really?
Double Contradiction Si Paraluman? Ows?!?!?	Double Contradiction Paraluman? O RLY?!?!?
Triple Contradiction Kamukha mo nga ba siya nun? Si Paraluman nga ba talaga? Nung bata pa tayo?	Triple Contradiction Did you really look like her then? Was it really Paraluman? When we were young?

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Ad Copy PARALUMAN Goat Placenta Para sa may nais ng diwatang-kutis!! *NO APPROVED THERAPEUTIC CLAIMS*	Ad Copy PARALUMAN Goat Placenta For ethereally white skin!! *NO APPROVED THERAPEUTIC CLAIMS*
Linear Logical Analysis           So:           Si Paraluman. Isang aktres. Na maganda. Nung Dekada Singkuwenta. Para sa Sampaguita Pictures.           Kamukha mo siya. So, maganda ka. O, at least, sa opinyon ng ibang tao, maganda ka. O, at least, sa opinyon ko, maganda ka. O, at least, mestizahin.           Nung bata pa tayo. So, maganda ka lang pala nung bata ka. So, hindi ka na maganda ngayon. Matanda ka na kasi, e. So, panget ka na.	Linear Logical Analysis           So:           Paraluman. An actress. A beautiful one. In the Fifities. For Sampaguita Pictures.           You look like her. So, you're beautiful. Or, at least, in other people's opinions, you're beautiful. Or, at least, in my opinion, you're beautiful. Or, at least, mestiza-looking.           When we were young. So, you were only beautiful when you were young. So, you're not beautiful now. Because you're old now. So, you're ugly now.
True Philippine Ghost Story “Pero kasi, mahal ... ako si Paraluman, e ...”	True Philippine Ghost Story "But you see, my love ... I am Paraluman ..."

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The author has made the entire collection freely viewable and downloadable here on Scribd.com.  The variations that I didn't post here include a number of English-language ones, and a number of practically untranslatable Tagalog ones (the Square Poem is mind-blowing; the Diona, Tanaga and Dalit are specific poetic forms).  There's also an afterword explaining the reasoning behind the construction of some of the more obscure variations.