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forkedtongues2010-04-26 12:35 am
naad) wrote in forkedtongues2010-04-26 12:35 am
another नज़्म
लुत्फ़-ए-मै तुझसे क्या कहूँ ज़ाहिद
हाय कमबख्त, तुने तो पी ही नहीं
lutf-e-mai tujhse kyaa kahun zaahid
hai qambakht, tune to pi hi nahin
what do i say to you of the lure of wine, o ignorant one
you fool, you haven't even wet your whistle
हाय कमबख्त, तुने तो पी ही नहीं
lutf-e-mai tujhse kyaa kahun zaahid
hai qambakht, tune to pi hi nahin
what do i say to you of the lure of wine, o ignorant one
you fool, you haven't even wet your whistle
no subject
i was thinking of puttin up this one myself :)
one suggestion though change "you haven't even wet your whistle" to "you have never drunk (any)!"